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Old 05-14-05, 01:09 PM   #13
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From: I F0rg0t...h0l 0n lemme think
This was feedback posted for Ax Dogg

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Weak battle,honestly...seems ta me netha wun of u was tryin....i seen no punches...multis...vocab was basic...structure was off on both verses but still readable ta me.....my vote goes ta Ax cuz i can tell he put a lil more time then sky in his verse...plus his was more of a diss....

not really much tho explain....just elevate to both emcees and take more time...Sky u said u hadda battle casper? well u shouldve did that before u came to battle Ax...excuses wont get u a vote,its ya rhymes that get em.
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