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Old 05-14-05, 02:25 PM   #20
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Voted For: D-Rock

Overall a semi-good verse,50/50
wordplay was good
punches,not many but what i seen was good
vocab was basic,rhymed nicely tho
structure was readable
opener was honestly weak
closer was nicely done n worded
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