Voted For: Limited Edition
summary:
Limited Edition, your words were few and powerful. i mean, the way you brought this was good. although i despised the way you worded many things, i enjoyed the duration of the multies and structured flow. the verse was overrall, good. you had some minor mishaps. but i believe you deserve my vote, both hands down. word. um the only advice i would see fit to pass to you, is to udilize the thesaurus hidden in your cerebral quater. good read.
Topical, i saw your verse as handled incorrectly, im not sure there is such a thing as a illigitemate topical, since topicals are cardiovascular, meaning they are told with one opinion, one view and one only. therefore your verse cannot be blasphemis, it just wasnt as enjoyable as LE's. it was good, but your rising action (approach) didnt really connect with the climax. looking at it this way, clarifies that it was good...just not well premeditated. good luck with the rest of the polls.
vote: Limited Edition