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Old 05-14-05, 05:18 PM   #3
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alot of multis good wordplay sometimes played punches but overall i enjoyed reading it.
tha line(Freestylin off Da Dome, Half of Them I Cant Reveal
Chargez Pendin On Me,Cuz theze-teenz Think Im For-real)
got me feelin like you are sum sorta molester.explain that for me!
over all it was good
structure was easy ta read an made easy tah understand ur flow.
8/10
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