Metropolis
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IP:
this was a hot drop here. some good emotional bars in there and some decent imagery could have used some more of that. rhyme scheme was fine, and flow was on point.
i give it a 9/10 because overall it was hotness, just need some fine tuning
i liked this section right here
Take 2 and divide it by one, continues to be 2 genius,
So when someone get between us its still you by my side,
Not cloudin my sight to know that forever you'll stay,
With a relationship that never fades in and out like the tides,
^^that was my fav part of the joint.
i like the change up in the rhyme scheme it made it more unique in its on style n shit,
keep doin ya thing....1...
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