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Old 05-15-05, 01:33 AM   #11
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Voted For: The Black Plague

Bonecollector's verse:

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
Not the best opener, but a nice line. Nice punch also.

keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
Not that hard. Kinda lost in this one. Shouldve explained it. Because clearly its a personal, but what's his crew name really?

You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Wack. Because of the wording

Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
Nice thinking, but not all that. Just ight for me

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
I like how this rhymed....that about it.

......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Fairly, the first line is played. You should know that by now. And the other line shouldve been better

Not a hard hitting verse at all. I don't think this is winning material for this battle. Yo punches were too soft, alot of played concept, and alot of bad worded lines. I wasn't feeling this verse. No hate, just not a good verse to me.
The Black Plague's verse"

All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Nice personal. Nice opener too, to top of a bad verse by your oponent

Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Clearly a dope personal. Understood. Worded well, and I knew just what you were talking about. LMAO

Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
Don't get this personal, but nice rhyming

I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”
Not worded too good, but still a nice line

No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
LMAO. true too. I like this line. Mos Def my favorite so far. This was dope

Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
lol...Not that hard hitting, but funny. Nice personal.

[B]I give my vote to TBP because he came consistent with his punches, and personals. He didn't have too many played concepts in there, and his verse was rather funny to me. I liked how he didn't hafto explain all his lines, and I still understood them.(the personals). This was just some good RV diss shit right here, and you get my vote.


RTF on battle against esco plz.

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Nice battle. No hate to either of you. Continue to elevate.

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