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Old 05-15-05, 06:15 AM   #15
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^Yo do more internal rhymes.. Like, instead of just rhyming at the end of the line, throw a few more in on each line.. Your shit will flow a lot better if you use assonance too, look that up in the dictionary if you need to....

But yo..
Ash to dust I break rappers..
12am you can catch me disecting emcees in a black jacket..
Killings a bad habbit, but they make it to easy to gag faggots..
In the back of a truck, cadalac wrapped in surrand wrap..
Dusted with anthrax, plus the scent of shit from a dirty ass crack..
I'll cut through you with meat cleavers aids needles & blast gats..
On wack cats, that cant rap still trapped with their fan caps..
I spit the shit that makes kids kill cops n wear their pants sagged..

Fuck it..
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