It just stopped all of a sudden? Is that normal? I don't think track was finished already but okay, I'll just comment on part I did hear. Beat behind it isn't necessary and I'd actually prefer it without I think. You have a nice, clear voice but as the beat comes in, your lyrics kinda come on the background. Lyrics are nice, strong emotion, good delivery as well. Found good balance in your vocab so keep it up man!

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