Voted For: immortality

ey yo u no i aint scared and if i was, i wouldnt denie it/
cause im the one round here,and i supply it/
^^weak
and wat im doin u caint do nuttin about it and u caint stop it/
so da best thing u can do is sit back and watch it/
^^diss the other guy already
spread through erbody like a virus in they veins/
yea u got some skill boy but the only thing missin is ya brains/
^^decent
dis is a freestyle boy,so u no i post it quickly/
yo ass gon so fast, u da one sayin u miss me/
^weak,flowed good though
bitch please, u aint gon nuttin on dis verse/
u juss hatin cause god bless me wit dis beautiful curse/
^^wat the hell u talkin bout?

Conclusion-Ur punches sucked.Most of them didn't seemed to insult.Ur flow was a lil above average.Just work on ur punchlines cause that verse was weak.

lil jj is terrible, your raps is unbearable, so just stop
your carreer exploding, ha, that'd only happen if your cherry *popped*
^^sucks,didn't flow so good
cuz your a *pussy*, and couldnt push me, if i was weed
trying to diss me on the mic, but bitch you cant even reed (1)
^^decent
please, immortality, had this won from the get go
pissing into a camp fire, is the only time you own, flaming flows
^^nice
a zero on the scale is wut you get, everytime, your J.ust J.udged
closest youve been to *robbery*, is your morning coffee *mugs*
^^good
couldnt notice hot *shit*, if it fell into your *pants*
shouldve quit this site when you had the god given chance
^^1st. line here is played out.

Vote-Ur wordplay was really nice.BUT WAT i NEED TO SEE IS MORE PERSONALS.That is really sumtin that is missin.That whole verse could have been prewritten.Personals Personals Personals.

Vote-immortality(vote in my battle)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907