Voted For: MainFrame
your verses is so weak the fuckin' mic spit at you back/
quit now cuz im here to make you split when you wack/
^^set-up was nice..but punch sucked
Your punches hit harder than roy jones when he dropped/*
people stoped reading ya verses since ya first line popped/
^^should have switch up set -up with the punchline
now this 'cartoon figure' thinks hes hard but hes got/
to understand the incense will leave him 'drawn' on the spot/**
^^good
your clips wouldnt empty even if you had a teacher to learn/
if you poured gasoline in throut verses still wouldnt burn/
^^best line in ya verse
Conclusion-Ur flow was average.The 1st couple a lines hurt you the most.U set-up ur punches nicely but the punch itself was whak.U last couple of lines were good.Decent verse.
That MainFrame dude, he's wack, I'll blast that kid.
Shit, I only dissed myself, to give you a chance to win.
^^^didn't rhyme,concept was good but execution was not
In doesn't use common cense so hell will be bound.
But I heard genius struck him, but Incense fell to the ground.
^^Ripped the oppenent's name beautifully
We know those rhyme's aren't your's, don't worry I won't tattle.
Because the only way you receiving credit, is by voting on battle's.
^^weak
I respect nobody's, and in this battle respect I'm keeping.
I'm tired but I'll let you call the shot's as they pummel your mid-region!
^^OK
Conclusion-Incenitive had a better flow.But you owned here in the punchlines.Ur best line was the one where you ripped her name.Don't see that too much here.
Vote-MAinFrame(vote in my battle)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907