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Old 05-15-05, 03:27 PM   #41
~Babylon~
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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
no!.......
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ummm no!
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
coo......
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
better!

overal an ok verse nothing really great.....only 2 lines were even deicent.......


Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
no!
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
NO!
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
umm...the first line was better...should switched it around
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ummmm....NO!

not good at all..........



neither verse was good they both sucked.......so yall need to improve alot......

v/Oz
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