Typing as I listen...I love this beat an the sample on hook....flow is on point....ya quality is upped alot...I like ya delivery to....I think u shoulda followed that drum in the beat tho when it went "b-b-b-b-b-boom"..it'd be iller if ya lyrics went right wit it when it looped...but nonetheless it was still ill....the story is ill.........I love your imagery...you painting a picture with a words...I could feel where u were comign from an I could see the story as it unfolded..good drop.....7/10......1

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