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Old 05-15-05, 04:36 PM   #15
Armada Da 187
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votin for 8


ight 8 got this due to harder punches n way better metas

8

ya punches were ight a lil bit soft but in a way were creative
Ya personals i only seen one in it was pretty creative man
Ya metaphors were creativew and hard hittin, they got u myt vote

meta:
if you read the whole dictionary, i still doubt you'd be an ill rhymer/
Even if yah got signed tah "Ca$h Money", yah wouldn't be a "Big Tymer"/
(lol creative, hard hittin)

nice personal
yur whole styles whack, look at yah name, "Wicked" One/
convulsive lier, cause the number of wicked rhymes yah dropped is none
(nice n creative)

ya had good flow and a descent strucutre it was easy to keep with so props o ya verse

Wicked
Ya punches were pretty descent some hard others wernt
it seemed like u wernt comin hard but more of a guilty sorta of verse, ya punches were sorta out there man
ya personals- i didnt really notice anything hard from you on this category
Ya metas- not very hard, they were creative but not hard enough
multies- didnt see any so elevate on those
ya had a good strucutre which was followed by a good flow so props on that

get a lil harder on punches and personals man

both elevate on personlas and multies

descent battle

v/8........... Better Metas, Personals



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