you got that eminem style goin...I like the way You broke down tha relationship!

I gotta say that was great...really...that mustve took alotta thought an emotion ta put
ur heart out there like that.

best line that I felt"Reconsidering my thoughts, actually it was more than a few,
Wish i had known the result of an attempted abortion,
Before spendin a fortune tryna believe i'm important to you,
Behind those innocent lines is a criminal mind and,
I was blinded cause I've never seen someone as gorgeous as you"
^^^I've been threw it..an regret that!^^^

keep goin with the real!!