la la la....verse being processed....

shit man, you got emotion coming outta the wazoo....its kinda hard to flow to without the beat, but it doesn't matter that much..just cant be stubborn about shit, cause it was a unique style that was enjoyable to read......like i said, loved the emotion, really stood out in this piece, imagery was good, not as much because this was an emotional piece, so it didn't really matter.......good use of vocab, shit man....this was dope, really expressed yourself nicely, easily understandable and definately relatable......good piece my homie

yeah, you should go check out my poems....beach.......word, keep up.........and if you still wanna do that one collab or whatever, i totally forgot about it, and what to write about and stuff, haha,a word

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