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Lol some one was high when they wrote this. But seriously it was good. creative, weird but entertaining subject. Good job painting the picture of the bear attacking. You had a good structure but pretty simple. not too many multis. And just because of what it's about I wouldn't read it more than once or twice. but I did get a laugh out if it. 5.5/10
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