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I tried to keep the door closed
even though my souls burning slow
i dont want the whole world to be singed
but the hotter it gets ..the more I want to let it go
let the fire free.. let the flames flow
the harder I try to save its frame.. i become unhinged..

the door has open it hurts deep ..the heat hard unbearable flames
i just want to pass away
I beg for deliverance but my wounds juss get irritated by your acid rain..
Poetry I used to love your words, your spirit, your mind..
One upon a time you helped me see the light.now u driving me blind
You used to encourage my hands..giving them a reason to befriend a pen
now theyve dipped in sin..they write of death
theres no more Joy in there words..No more happiness..

I used to be determine to impress u..constanly with persistence
I remember my life was waddling in a pig pen u made me feel Still alive
Now your too busy for me.. you follow a ghost..yet you mock my existence
You inspired my mind,
then detest my inner thoughts..imagine how i feel inside..
sometimes my pen justs cries,sometimes it bleeds
and pours over the scribe without a drop a joy..until the veins emptied...

it was spoken

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Where Im From! Cabrini Green!

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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION

Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1

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Originally Posted by NarKotic

Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10