im feeling this beat...

quality is very annoying...sounds like your standing on the other side of the room recording...but anyway...the lyrics is coo...delivery could use some work...sounds like your just reading straight off the paper...flow is ok...not to special, pretty basic...this shit got boring quick...you sound like you just dont care...i had to turn it off after 1:30...you need to work on your emotion...work on keeping your listeners attention...because it is very easy to drift away from this song...

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