hi fi & lo fi didnt work...so i had to download it...
listenin...sounds like it could be a dope chorus...you should of waited to post the whole thing...because this is kind of to short to judge...but...your singing seems straight...lyrics are deep...you mos def need a new mic, lol...i feel you could of opened up a bit...to show your singing skills more...thats if, you can actually sing good...but basically, i could hear this as a chorus...i'll be waiting for you to drop the longer version...keep doing you, stay up....
hit up one of these links...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190941
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190940