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Voted For: Babble.On
meh, babble gets this easy....
he had harder, more direct punches, and all-round better flow...which was nice to read.....ax, your stuff wasn't that great, too basic, need to elevate, but you're coming along....just up the creativity of your verse and add a little complexity
babble, cool verse, like how it flowed and use of multies was efffective......you had more witty lines but most of them were kinda self-glorifying....actually your whole closer was.....but you had personals, and harder punches,.....and thats what wins
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