Voted For: AckRite

ack-aiight you got my vote cuz your had harder hitting punches........your structure was a lil messed up only cuz your font size tho.....so next time dont make it soo big........your vocab was basic......try adding more complex words.......little to no multis, work on puttin some in to help flow.......your flow was decent even tho u had no multis......not and personals......try incorperating some into your verse.....but overall good solid drop
7-10

arm-aiight your verse was a lil weak......some of your punches needd to be worded better for them to hit harder.......but some were good and a lil humerous....its nice to see a lil humor........you had one really stretched line........so it kinda hurt the good structure you had going.....not good vocab...work on uppin that....not really any personals.....so yeh work on puttin some of them in......flow was aiight a lil choppy tho....work on multis to help that out........but decent drop..you've done better tho
5-10

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