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Voted For: Bernonedown
okay, this was one of the whackest battles i've read in a long time....uh stanza, you didn't really diss him at all, no punches really directed at him, structure was bad, stretched lines....everyline
uhmm, nothing really specific, no creativity....opener was just stupid as hell....wow, overall, this was a bad verse by you man....didn't even play off his name at all, no real punches, so i can't even give this to you man
bernone, man, no structure at all, but at least you tried, you gotta elevate madly.....gotta stop self-glorifying....but overall, you attempted more punches at your opponent, kept it consistent, but overall, you both did horrible, but i am giving it to bern one because he was less whack
wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________,
doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank,
^ all because of that line and it was horrible, thats how bad this battle was, but lol, funny to read, keep up both
v/bernonedown
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