Voted For: Murdz

The metaphor- hmm a few played concepts in there but not to bad eggs and plays doesn't rhyme. Structures fine. It's not necassary to put "/" at the end of a line and separate your bars. Nothing really hard hitting in your verse

Murdz- Nice flow here. Your punches were more hard hitting than Meta's. You had a few filler lines though. I liked this line best.
"your punches are like your Internet service - "Sorry, can't-connect"

My vote goes to murdz due to the fact that his punches and his flow was better.

Return the favour plz