Voted For: Murdz

Murdz

yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
^hehe, nice opener

you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
^ohhh, nice wordplay formed into punch

bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
^good good, no real punch though

You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~
^they say "come hard" lines are played but this one is mad funny

First of all, wussup with the boo shit man? Rofl, nah I'm just kidding. Overall this was a nice keystyle you brought on table right here, stayed good consistent with nice wordplay and hard punches. Only fell off once in the third bar which wasn't a punch, flow was good, great balance in your vocab, structure was aight.


Yvonne

I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
^no punch, bit self-glorification

i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
^coo coo

its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
^hehe funny bar

his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly
^nice closer

You definitely picked up the pace towards the ending because I wasn't really feeling your first two bars. First one was only self-glorifying, no real punch and second one was sorta basic. The last 2 bars were hardhitting and funny though, flow was good overall. Vocab was aight as well as structure, few attempted personals. Too bad you weren't as consistent as Murdz with the punches cuz this verse showed lot of potential...no hate...

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