Voted For: LexiKon

LexiKon

Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
^lego-line might be bit played but overall coo opener

He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
^ROFl at that last line, had me cracking

You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
^nice wordplay formed into a hard punch

Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
^nice closer

Good battle verse right here, got that wordplay on lock and you had some damn hardhitting punches, no real personals though. I laughed my ass off at that second bar with them midgets, hahaha...good one there man! Flow's good, got some multis in there, not too much basic rhyming. Found great balance in your vocabulary, not too basic but not too complex either. Structure is cool and overall I was really feeling this verse man!


MaRVJay1009

da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
^dope last line, nice personal, not feeling first line

punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
^good wordplay but no real punch though

lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
^hehe funny bar

only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's"
^nice wordplay again, good closer

Nice verse here too, had dope personal in first line and good punches for the rest. I was feeling your flow here, also had some multis in there which improved that. My favo bar is the third one or the closer, they both nice filled with wordplay but the punch doesn't always come out too good like in the second bar. The vocab was cool, same level as LexiKon, structure looks nice as well. Some nice rhyming words here too.

My vote goes to LexiKon because he got me laughing with some of his bars, bit more creativity and stayed more consistent. No hate whatsoever Marv, you got nice verse as well but I have seen way better from you. Kinda got feeling you let this one off easy ya know...

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