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Old 05-16-05, 01:40 PM   #566
riddlemethat
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From: Milton Keynes
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Whats with all the usless little lines you sat down to write?..
You've shortened the words in ya verse so much it sounds white...
That guy's gona need a lot of shit the way you make him out to sound...
Take heed to my shit cos I ain't clownin around, I set out to astound...
That means to leave you in a haze all dazed and confused with the way I spit...
I could proof read ya shit 5 times and all i'd still see infront of me is a pile of grit...
Or should I say shit, as produced throught the fingertips of the clown Ecko-D...
With the help of his mind and his mouth layed to the mat for the 1-2-3...
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Originally Posted by Adrenaline
yo riddle me that has a dope sig....that shit's hilarious...nice nameplay....lol
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