listening:

verse 1: your quality is nice.. your voice is okay.. your lyrics is okay.. but really.. u should try to show more emotion.. because emotino is very important if u want to get people into ur music u know?? oh n also work on delivery man.. thats important as well..

chorus: very nice.. damn trip.. you always doin hot chorus's...

Verse 2: very nice as always.. very good flow.. and very good emotion.. lyrics is nice.. n quality is excellent as always.. don't know wut else to say to improve since u teachin me alot of wut i know in music lol...well from my point of view.. this ain't ur best work.. and really didn't surprise me.. im thinking u didn't try as hard?? well delivery was very good... well maybe im wrong.. n most likely i am cuz im watching Lord Of The Rings (by the way is the best movie ever!) at the same time while im listening lol.. so yeah...

overall: 7/10.. reason this was a 7 was cuz trip made such a good chorus n verse agen..
overall:


ur new to this music.. but good job since this is the first song i heard from u.. just really elevate n keep writting

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