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Old 05-16-05, 08:03 PM   #11
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Voted For: CeleriTy

Your 19 rapping againts younger cats its like your froze in time
wait maybe just the fridge but after 6 lines youl be like a mime
Um, No.....3/10
to stiff to move just like the trailblazer after they lost rasheed
like detroit im on the top smoking u just like an 8th of weed
Nah Man....3/10
really quick without having any regret feeling good afterwards
im done messing with this vegatable go back to being pervs
Best Line....4/10

^^You Lacked Alot, Structure Was Tight Tho, You Had No Real Punches, One Personal, No Wordplay, No Creativity....

you better just try your luck..only way you'll win cuz bitch ya rhymin sucks
If the Wack's "weeded" out in battles.. Da Return bout to be High as fuck
Ta Ha!.....Funni Shit....6/10
Fuck competing... this cats scared as shit with ruptured breathing
Return looks like a million bucks ...at the start of hunting season
Nice Line....6/10
believe its crunch time... and believe that you dont want to be brave
cause I'll give you a bruised ego to go along with your face
Nice Closer....Strong Opener......8/10

Basically You Had Tha Humor, Creativity, Personals...DaReturn's Wasnt Affective...Gave This 2 CELERITY

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