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Old 05-16-05, 08:33 PM   #12
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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aight..i peeped this earlier...and CJ...ya lyrics was pretty good..woulda been betta wit a moe polished flow..ckuz to me ya flow seemed real shakey...like u werent sure of yaself...so that made the presence and deilivery bad...also sounds like u readin lol...mixxin is pretty good tho..i tried to listen again..but the shit aint work...so...work on ya flow if u do that u will be pretty good...

Trip..the emotion u had on here was good..it was a nice contrast between u and CJ..he was laid back..u were kinda on a more hype flow....and a more hype delivery...ya lyrics was good nuffin new tho ...ya flow was good too...i hate leavin feed on ya tracks cku it makes me seem like a d/r...ckuz nuffin is reall worong wit ya tracks..MESS UP OR SUMTHIN!!!..lol..
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