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Old 05-16-05, 08:48 PM   #7
fluidmoon
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again, this is a dope piece, feel the pain of both emcees layin lines like you were involved,don't know the story fully, but felt the emotion where others i think would have problems, i think you both had good flow and rhyme scheme, some vocab lacked,and you seemed like you did right by the lyrics but how you came across, representation was off...all in all, i think you both have talent..keep dropping.1
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