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Old 05-16-05, 08:51 PM   #18
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Voted For: Babble.On

Babble On...u have a ok verse...u lost me in ya flow sumtime but i found myself again...u had sum ok punches,nuthin to brag about....structure is horrible which prolly messed up my reading.

Ax Dog-Ur verse was pretty basic and need lots of work...creare sum punches and come wit better personals...u got the potensial it just seem like u really dont try ta make people say "Damn!"...

punches-Babble On
Structure-Ax
vocab-Babble On
Flow-Ax
Opener-Babble On
Closer-Tie

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