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Originally Posted by Spoken Prophecy

I tried to keep the door closed
even though my souls burning slow
i dont want the whole world to be singed
but the hotter it gets ..the more I want to let it go
let the fire free.. let the flames flow
the harder I try to save its frame.. i become unhinged..

the door has open it hurts deep ..the heat hard unbearable flames
i just want to pass away
I beg for deliverance but my wounds juss get irritated by your acid rain..
Poetry I used to love your words, your spirit, your mind..
One upon a time you helped me see the light.now u driving me blind
You used to encourage my hands..giving them a reason to befriend a pen
now theyve dipped in sin..they write of death
theres no more Joy in there words..No more happiness..

I used to be determine to impress u..constanly with persistence
I remember my life was waddling in a pig pen u made me feel Still alive
Now your too busy for me.. you follow a ghost..yet you mock my existence
You inspired my mind,
then detest my inner thoughts..imagine how i feel inside..
sometimes my pen justs cries,sometimes it bleeds
and pours over the scribe without a drop a joy..until the veins emptied...[/B]

[B]it was spoken

The words in highlights were your strongest, that was some emotional spoken vibe that you got on and didn't seem to shake..until you it seemed you thought about it, and got self conscious..you lost that out cry of passion, and it hurt you here...this was dope all around,but if you stuck toy uor gut,and told whoever your talking to what you really felt..i mean continued to....this would be great...it was good,but keep sticking to your gut,and you can make wonders happen with your writing...pay more attention to your english...keep dropping.1