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From: Barrie
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liked the piece. liked the story you told. imagery could have been better if it was more emotionfelt... vocab/flow/structure = solid. n/m bad to say here. just a solid all around drop. keep it up.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190090
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