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Old 05-16-05, 11:55 PM   #40
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Voted For: LexiKon

mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family
I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts
And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth
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wow that was bad

Lex-
My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1]
You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2]
You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets"
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decent lines... that punches lines played but u put a lil flip on it... and u used wordplay, i dont hardly even see any in skiptz verse.
ya verse bar is good wordplay and personal and punch... nice line there...
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no hate, skiptz u know u came weak.

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