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Old 05-17-05, 12:37 AM   #37
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Valor

[B]This was a dope battle, i was really feelin it , But i have to give this one to valor , he just came really good , and i was feeling his drop alittle more

Valor-
You had lots of imagery ,good emotions going into your peice..
your structure was good , made the reader want to read your verse... You had nice vocab and good wordplay,.... i loeved your worden ... Liked the refrence to when he talks to god... liked your peice alot...Keep it up

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Nice drop line dont get me wrong it just feel short in betting valor.. You had nice structure it was really on point...nice wordplay and vocab , i was really feelin it , you had nice imagery, and good emotions ,also nice feeling going into your drop.. i just felt valors verse alittle more... Keep it up

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