Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Voted For: tim dim
BOTH OF YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT. THIS BATTLE GOES TO TIM BECAUSE OF HIS STRUCTURE. AND I FELT HIS OVERALL VERSE WAS BETTER. HIS ATTEMPTS AT PUNCHES AND DISSES WERE NOTICEABLE AND BETTER. SMOKEY, FIX UP YOUR STRUCTURE AND SHIT BEFORE YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT GETTING INTO ANOTHER BATTLE. I SUGGEST YOU GO VOTE ON BATTLES TO SEE HOW STRUCTURE SHOULD LOOK. YOU DIDNT EVEN HAVE ANY DOPE LINES IN THERE, AND IT WAS HARD TO READ. TIM GETS MY VOTE EASILY. EVEN THO BOTH VERSES WAS MAD WACK.
HE WINS THIS BECAUSE OF HIS STRUCTURE AND ATTEMPT AT PUNCHES AND DISSES. AND I CAN SEE HE HAS MORE POTENTIAL TO BE DOPE IN THA LONG RUN THAN SMOKEY.
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