This was feedback posted for Omnivision
IP:
this shit was hot im feelin both verses 4 real i was real interested in the battle n i think that yall was hot in here well keep it up but lookin at newkids verse n him droppin 1st but not to much ahead he did real good n im goin wit him for goin strong n original in the beggin wit some rea nice punches on just about every line. nothin but Hints of Advice no hate or ridin
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Full force on these dudes tell em fall back
These kids got toilet paper but mine is a tall stack
I bring it to them at first hand no hesitatin like U.P.S.
Hit these fake chest niggas n cause da cancer in da chest
That lil homie I got on my side that's feared like a dick
Just the way it stick niggas like they a homo chic
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