this was ok, im kinda of tired of all these depressing open mics tho. lol sike its all good. decent vocab in here, good structure and some ok flow. work on puttin more imagery in a piece like this, nah mean. it makes ya joint more effective and try n use some more sense based vocab. overall 8/10 keep doin ya thing and RETURN THE FAVOR
links are in the sig, holla at me

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