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Old 05-17-05, 06:48 PM   #18
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
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Voted For: Da UFC

Aii This Battle wasnt All dat lemme show you

You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
1st Line ..>Sucked ...second line made me laugh
Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
1st Line....>sucked Second line was Aii
Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
Ok Verse in Total Your first lines werent all dat good you need to work on having your 1st line lead into your second line which is your pucn which will make You pucnh much stronger

Smokey817
..................> Wack <......................

And DonT take it to offense when I say

Give up Your Rap Life
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