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Old 05-17-05, 08:28 PM   #19
MiSk
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Voted For: Da UFC

-Da UFC-
You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good opener, 1st line was a little weak

Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good wordplay, just not hard enough

Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
^^^^ 6/10 1st line is a self glory setup, wasnt feeling the hit, not a good closer

22/30 = %73


-smokey817-

smokey i can't vote using a percentage cause i cant find ya bars or lines...what i can say
nothing rhymes, a lot of self glory, hits weren't hard, structure was bad...sorry

no hate, just honest opinion



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