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Voted For: Da UFC
-Da UFC-
You tight? kid i might be nice but now im ready to fight
But 817 aint just ya name, its your ranking on the site
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good opener, 1st line was a little weak
Im right you're horrible leavin u lyrically shot, u aint hot
This dude couldnt be fine if he parked in an illegal spot
^^^^ 8/10 good hit, good wordplay, just not hard enough
Watch, 6 lines, ive dismantled and dissed this mans shit
You're only smokey cause i just finished smokin your spit
^^^^ 6/10 1st line is a self glory setup, wasnt feeling the hit, not a good closer
22/30 = %73
-smokey817-
smokey i can't vote using a percentage cause i cant find ya bars or lines...what i can say
nothing rhymes, a lot of self glory, hits weren't hard, structure was bad...sorry
no hate, just honest opinion
Vote: Da UFC
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There's a lot of talk about whos the hottest, to be honest
hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us!
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