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Paranoid- The emotion on your piece was good, liked the way you talkd about her problems. And like you told me on aim, you added more complex shit to it, and yeah you did. Nice imaginary, but add more meta'z in it. Nice vocab. The angle you came from was totally different from what you use to drop, but it was still good. The flow was nice. Good drop.

Omnvision- Alright man, nice. The imaginary was good, with good emotion. Liked your view point. The thing that REALLY stood out in your verse was Emotion, shit was nice. The imaginary was good needs to be upp though. Nice vocab. Nice Flow. Dont stretch your lines that much. The Complexity was meh ok, upp on that. But either way nice drop

Should be a close battle, G-luck to both of you

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