ah'ight son....I loved ya beat choice in this..taking it back....ya flow was good...but your cadence sucked son....you would cut the last word of alot of ya lines short to take a breathe...and if I wasn't reading ya lyrics as I listened I wouldn't have caught everything u said...u stumbled on a few of ya words also....however aside from that u was good, had good emotion, good delivery, good flow...quality was fair..it was clear enough....really it was jus a ya breathe control an pronounciation that wa suspest...fix dat an dats would be all round solid...overall 7/10...good diss had some funny lines

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