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Old 05-18-05, 12:38 AM   #8
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Voted For: AckRite

aight yo akkrite to dis

akkrite-ya verse was pretty good u had sum aight punches dat hit hard.... u had sum good vocab i thaught u was wakk on da real but u impressed me u had sum good personals and multies n maybe 1 or 2 lines good drop it was easy 2 read n it wasnt stretched each line followed da next line good openor u had threw da whole battle it was kool good closer 2

the sorrow-i thaught u was gon win dis easy but u didnt u did have a couple good punches but dey wasnt as hot as akkrites sum of dem didnt hit hard and sum of dem was jus plain wakk but u did have sum personals ya verse was eazy 2 read also each line follow each otha dont do dat quote shit unless its wit a hot as personal ya verse started off ok and it ended kind of dull keep it hot da whole way n ull win everi battle

akkrite took dis tho

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