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hmm.. this was decent it could have been alot better though.
alittle to simple for me , your bars were short and to the point..
alittle simplicit to me, elevate on wordplay and vocab ,
structure was off , lines were all over the place..
overall this was a decent drop..you had good emotions
and nice imagery , i feel your pain , my moms i bitch too..
Drop a link!
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