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Old 05-18-05, 10:46 AM   #1
Ghost
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This was feedback posted for smokey817

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Vote-Tim Dim
Smoke! Man Seperate Yo LINEZ so We Can -Atleast- Know What Ya tryin To Say or Rhyme!N Maybe we Can Judge Ur verse!Read the Verse N Didnt Even Make Since Ta Me!
Tim Dim----------------------
Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down
lol 8/10
Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son
^Pretty Weak 6/10
Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun
LoL 7.5/10
just thought id tell ya da scorez of ya linez but HOLLA!
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