Voted For: Ghost

Ghost - Good verse, work on structure a bit and you'll do fine. Had some hard punches, but your closer was very weak... Try not to self glorify.. Your verse had a good flow, was typed out more like how an audio would sound. But I like most of the vocabulary in your drop and it was a good verse.

liberal artist - Pretty played verse..The structure and the punches were allright. It flowed good, but I've seen the same style of punches countless times. Come original and not so played and you'll do fine in future battles. Good drop to both of you but Ghost gets my vote..

Vote: Ghost

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