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Old 05-18-05, 12:57 PM   #19
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simple as this, you can get a feel for a flow if it is structured when written for example

no flow: i went to the store and bought a pack of ciggaretts. ????
flow: ima animal spittin flamable liquids at gas cans n random foes..

yes i know those bars both suck but i wrote them without stopping typing and its purely for example purposes, you see how u can get a lil more feel for the flow on second bar?
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