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 Voted For: NewKid
 
 NK
 Aiight Man Nice Verse You Had Some Decent Shit Here, Try To Work On Structure, Only Put Them Dots If There's A Pause In Your Verse, You Had Some Decent Wordplay Here Which Was Good, Punches Was Here Along With Your Vocabulary Good Verse Overall Man
 
 Omni
 First Off Man You Had Played Out Punches, Your Vocabulary Wasn't Even That Good, Your Personals Was Whack Didn't Really Hit To Hard, You Had Good Structure Though, Wordplay Hmm Meh, Iffy Shit Man But Overall Aiight Verse Man
 
 Vote-NewKid
 He Had Better Punches, Better Flow, Lacked Structure But Also Had Good Vocabulary And Personals
 No Hate, Peace
 
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