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Old 05-18-05, 02:01 PM   #18
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Voted For: lyrical mage

lyrical mage took dis

lyrical mage-aight ya verse wasnt good but it was betta den copasetik it wasnt all ova da place like herz ya punches was a lil bit betta den hiz not da best but dey was betta den hiz u had sum personals but not da best cum harder next time have more creative punches n u gon win

copaspetic-ya shit was kind of basic it looked like a paragraph fix ya bars ya punches was tired realli no hate elivate wit ya punches fix ya strukture have sum personals n ya verse cum harder wit multies,punches,wordplay and all da otha shit dat cums wit a battle and u gon win but until den u lost

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