Iight, man returning the feedback....

you need a new mic, quality is al;kfja;lskfjasl;dfj... .... lyrically this shit is really out-there, lots of vocab, it was put together well in the written sense, your delivery is kinda lack luster in the beginning like you were almost whispering, and it gets better towards the end, but just work on how you put your words out, trying to pronounce as well as you possibly can, your writing is really good, just work on the performance aspects of it and you could get really dangerous with the mic device... but yeah, buy a new mic, and keep workin- ( lots of standout lines in this shit, i'd like to hear it re-recorded w/ better quality cuz Im sure I missed something. ppeeesh.

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